Clarity of Confusion
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The mindfold is removed
damp tresses are stroked
stark light penetrates
still closed eyelids
the haze descended
still it remains
still not quite here
still not quite anywhere
it was made sure
she remained, though
always in control
but not within herself
by him
she’d flown
she’d felt the clouds
beneath her fingertips
she’d tasted
the crystal clean air
between two worlds
mortal parts still revelling
in that dark delicious space
waves of pleasurepain
lap at her skin
akin to sundown
on a seashore
her mind claws at the light
whimpering
broken
spent
calming words
pierce through
they soothe & compose
an affirmation of bond
eyes are opened
slowly returns her
clarity of confusion
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Pea
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Welcome to my submission for this week’s Wicked Wednesday..
A meme born & thriving thanks to Rebel..
I do hope you enjoyed..
This week’s {non~compulsory} prompt is ‘Confusion‘
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Lovely description of the space one gets into and the heights achieved… Beautify written.
This is wonderful. Your ability to convert visual images through written word is fantastic.
Thankyou Heath. I enjoy trying to make them so.
Pea ~x~
*blush* I love to do it, I think that’s what may come across..
beautifully written, This is a wonderful piece of poetry.
Thank you for sharing
Thankyou so much, my heart very much goes into every word. I am glad it shows..
Pea ~x~
Confusion is best solved with a good blindfold, sez I
~Kazi xxx
Hear Hear! And.. even a mindfold
You had me at: “The mindfold is removed” What wonderful use of language Pea. You are an inspiration and a muse to me.
Rachel x
That’s what got me, too. Such a subtle change, and yet so very well done!
xx Dee
Thankyou Dee!
God, everytime I see your name on my blog I have an overwhelming urge to snog you..
Thankyou darling, actually I’ve always called it a mindfold, I just said it one day & it stuck..
I am deeply humbled that I even inspire you..let alone be a muse. I’m lost for words, actually.
I adore you xx
I agree with both Molly and Angel. Your poetry always paints a picture in my mind. Beautiful
Rebel xox
If it paints a picture, then I am utterly utterly thrilled.. I couldn’t ask for more, thankyou darling xx
I agree with twisted angel, you are a very fine poetry and I always find something visual is sparked by reading your words
Mollyxxx
Molly, thankyou, so much..I am so very happy that something, no matter how small can spark something visual..
xx
I am not very familiar with poetry, but I have to admit that I like that text.
It surely “triggers” something.
I appreciate what you write !
Thankyou, Edward! Maybe you’ll become more familiar with it as you follow me. Although if you want to learn about the finer points of poetry, I am not a good example..
x
My name is actually not Edward, but you may recognize me from Twitter.
Anyway, I don’t want to learn about “finer” points of poetry. At least, not yet.
For now I prefer something that “speaks” to me. Your texts are just perfect for me so far.
Ah~ha! Adrien! Umm, why Edward on here?
And thankyou, long may my words speak to you in that way.. 
Pea ~x~
The question “Why Edward ?” finds an answer here: http://edwardonbebop.wordpress.com/why-edward/
I love coming and reading your poetry. You describe so many scenes and moments with visual acuteness that allows us to be there in our own minds.
Oh lady, thankyou.. You always leave such beautiful, encouraging comments for me. I am truly touched. I hope to keep you coming here for a long time to come.
xx
beautiful words.
Thankyou, darling..
Love it
Thankyou, mister
x